You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #54 [English - Español]View the full contextmanoldonchev (73)in Bananafish • 4 years ago Serene Smooth Surface A Bridge To The Earth Below The Low Lands Of Myth
Beautiful figures of sound in your haiku: alliterations of the "s" that recall the flowing of the waters, a second verse that has a harder sound (To The eaRTH) and introduces the "l"s of the dreamy land of reflection! Bravo!
And I thank you for the feedback!