RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #58 [English - Español]

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oacevedo (67)in Bananafish • 4 years ago

Un venturoso año 2021, les deseo a ustedes, mis compañeros del Mizu No Oto -Every Image Has Its Haiku- reunidos en torno a la comunidad #bananafish.
Esta es mi entrada para la ocasión: https://hive.blog/hive-169028/@oacevedo/mizu-no-oto-every-image-has-its-haiku-edition-58-english-espanol

-Todo fluye- Sí.
El hielo es una flor.
-Todo regresa-

-Everything flows- Yes.
Ice is a flower.
-Everything returns-

4 years ago in Bananafish by oacevedo (67)

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petronila (57) 4 years ago

@oacevedo Este hermoso haiku es muy circular. Gira sobre sí mismo, eterno retorno.

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carolkean (68) 4 years ago

Beautiful! You're clever at breaking the lines - I'd be like,

Everything flows,
Everything returns.
Ice is a flower.

This is why I rarely take a stab at writing haiku. I feel like I'm tone deaf.
You get it!

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