I love this.
Frozen fog captures both the season and the atmosphere in the photo in three short syllables.
Although the photo at first appears somewhat colorless, the author's use of the word white renders it colorful.
The poem brings both author and reader alive for me, makes me look twice knowing that the author did.
And again, we can see that English versions easily can be written in fewer syllables than Spanish versions, although I don't speak Spanish.
Really great haiku @carolkean, even if you did see fit to use a dang title! lol
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