Already you prove the utility of the community. I have discovered you. And I certainly hope you did not write this poem on the spur, because if you did, I will never try my hand a poetry again. (I don't anyway. I can't write poetry.)
This is really so well done. You had me with the ants. There they be, helpless, victim to the whim of fate (or an indifferent God). Whether they die or live, inconsequential. As is your grief, your loss.
The poem is rich in symbolism, the language expressive but not excessive. All in all a great debut for this community.Hi @warpedpoetic,
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