Even after all these years this still is sad to read. School relationships have a powerful influence on us. They are important to children. I'm sorry this friend was disloyal. The lesson you learned was good: don't tell people your secrets. Once you tell a secret to anyone, it's not a secret anymore.Hello @beckyroyal,
You wrote this with great effect. It was a powerful story. I do have one bit of advice: your intro paragraph is thematically related to the story but really does nothing to strengthen it. As a matter of fact, the story is powerful on its own and this paragraph I think takes from the force of the narrative.
Just my opinion. Your story, your choice :)
Oh thanks for that pointer. I'll try my best to be careful about my intro paragraphs next time.
I appreciate your opinion and compliments on my story. I am still learning.
Thanks for reading my sad expecrience and for leaving a comment.
Best regards 🤗🌺