Hello @iskawrites,
I'm not a foodie, so ordinarily this piece would not hold my interest. However, it's not really about food as much as it is about how you and your boyfriend negotiated. I found that interesting. You both compromised, and in the end the compromise not only made him happy, it also gave you an opportunity to discover a new eatery. That's a win win.
The first line is great. In that line we see it's not about food, entirely. It's about getting him to take you. The drama (gentle) begins with that ever-so-slight tension.
Good job with this story, @iskawrites.
Thank you so much @agmoore
I tried to do my best with this story after reading the corrections I received in my last story in the community
I am glad it was to your liking. I appreciate all the corrections and feedback on my story
That is wonderful. We try to consider stories carefully and only give constructive advice. Your writing is always a pleasure (for me) to read.
Thank you.
This is very kind of you. I will continue to do my best. 💖💖