OMG! My kind of story, if such a story can be claimed so casually. The pace of it is perfect, like the rush of time that swallows us up and drives us along. I'm still feeling the reverberation of the ending,
But still, it lingered. Always there under her skin.
Always .
That's it. You capture guilt, regret. It is a shadow, a presence. We live with it and pretend it's not there. But it never goes away.
This story is brilliantly written, seeming without effort and yet it goes straight as an arrow to its resolution.
Really well done, @itsostylish.