Hello @jrjoaramirez1992,
I like horror stories that are open to interpretation, as this one is. The narrator obviously believes he saw the red-eyed child. However, readers wonder how much of what he saw was his vivid imagination, fueled by his grandmother's stories. You seemed to enjoy writing this, and your energy is contagious.
This was a perfectly creepy horror story :)
hi @agmoore, thanks for the support, I love writing very imaginative stories with some reality in them for example; In this story I base myself on something really lived in my children, since I grew up in a town where horror stories are tradition and seeing horror is custom. From a very young age I like to invent stories of all kinds for recreation but I have never been able or have been reluctant to publish until now. thanks for the support you motivate me to continue writing many blessings!