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RE: Monsters Under The Bed | The Inkwell Prompt #33

in The Ink Well3 years ago

I knew it! I knew it was Larry :))

You did a good job of planting clues so that readers could guess before Camille discovered the truth. This is so real. Brothers do that. Small hurts they reward with terrible consequences. Never do the realize the effect their actions have. They are children.

Really well written. A sophisticated interpretation of the prompt.

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😄 Yes, it was Larry and Tim! Brothers are so good at playing pranks on their sisters which never ends well. They remind me of the ones I did when I was little.

Thank you so much for reading and for the glowing remark. 😊