Welcome, @leonardoalmaguer. I believe this is the first story I have read from you here (possible I am wrong for my memory is fallible). The story is evocative and beautiful. Some of the imagery is startling. For example:
Against all repressed rage I must have imagined that death was a beaten dog staring with sad eyes.
I am guessing you must be familiar with English for the translation does not mangle badly your Spanish version (I know a little Spanish and love reading this in the original).
I hope you keep writing for the community. In order to avoid misunderstanding, it would be wise for you to acquaint yourself with our Rules and our Manifesto. A versatile writer will have no problem accommodating these community rules and still write creatively.
Regards,
AG
jeje esa historia se me ocurrió de un tirón ayer, me he propuesto escribir contra viento y marea uno o dos artículos o cuentos por día, que me gustaría publicar en esta plataforma, no se bien si es permitido.
Si es la primera que escribo para esta comunidad, y ya con excelente amigos que le dejen comentarios a los demás me doy por satisfecho. Acá tiene un amigo.