Nicely paced, @litguru. I don't know why this reminded me of H.G.. Maybe it's the absence of gimmickry. This is an earth-bound, character oriented story and it works really well. Good old-fashioned story telling.
Nicely paced, @litguru. I don't know why this reminded me of H.G.. Maybe it's the absence of gimmickry. This is an earth-bound, character oriented story and it works really well. Good old-fashioned story telling.
Thank you, @agmoore.🫧
I'm happy you enjoyed my tale. I tried to balance out the tech talk with the intimate human element of the characters dealing with this unusual (and highly emotional) situation. I'm glad that came across in the writing.