At no point in this story was I confident that Noah would be admitted. That's great. You had me on the edge of my seat. You give us insight into Noah's character and you set the scene beautifully. Dialogue is also good.
Very effective story writing, @loveah
Looking forward to reading more!
Thank you so much, Ma. I appreciate the tip too. I'll keep trying to bring more good one. No promises though... Lol. Thanks again