You have great scene description in this story, @mrnightmare.net. Personally, I'd rather know that the person who left had not abandoned me. Plus, John can stop waiting and looking now.
Hope you are well, @mrnightmare.net. I've left you a small tip instead of a vote because I am recharging my VP for the day.
Thanks, I was not imagining it to be that way but when it was at the shore and there is a bonfire. I suddenly thought what if I would use that scene to be the problem of the story.