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RE: My Mother's Love 💕

in The Ink Well2 days ago (edited)


You have a remarkable story here, and yet it is so universal. A mother's love has no bounds. This could have been an even more compelling narrative if you had included more details about how this transplant went forward. Make your mother live before our eyes, as you describe her.Hello @omop,

Also, a note about your tags. Try to include more. For example, these tags might have included creativenonfiction, health, kidney, transplant. You have ten opportunities to categorize your story and get the attention of readers.

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