You tell a good story here, @oyebolu. It reminds me a little bit of the fable about the rabbit and the tortoise. The tortoise goes slowly, and deliberately to the destination. The irresponsible rabbit is left behind. You were kind to help your friend, even though she was irresponsible.
There is a problem with your story, though. While it has a good plot line, it is very hard to get through because the English usage is awkward. Your curation rewards suffer because of this. It would be good if you used a grammar program, such as Grammarly, to help you correct these issues.
Continue to write and work on your delivery. In time, with practice, you will certainly improve.
Good luck!
Thank you for the view and the correction to be made for betterment.
I will continue practicing that to perfect the selected writing style.
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