Hello @perfect20,
This story really grabbed me as I was reading. I was nodding my head to the insight of the narrator. Yes, secrets are exhausting and they are isolating. I applauded the scene where the narrator confronted her mother: no more secrets. However, I was waiting for the reason--why the secrets? What was the danger that required her to kill 'Kenny'? That's a big one. And the gun? And why didn't she send the narrator's letters to her father?
This is intriguing stuff. As an author, you are not kind to your readers when you leave them hanging like that :))
It is a great story, except for the fact that it ends with some material kept secret from the reader.
Thanks for sharing this with us. You have an interesting voice and perspective.
Thank you so much for your observations and insightful comments. It's an honour to see that you find my story very intriguing. That's a great motivation to me. I'll try to keep on improving. Thanks once again