This is so very human, @popurri. You gently lead us through this woman's day as she patiently deals with the challenges that come with her job. We admire her reserve and control as different personalities cross her path. The challenges are routine for her--elderly customer, the mother who can't control her children, the unending line and tired feet. We feel it all when she finally enters the apartment and looks forward to the comfort of her couch. That lovely sofa will not be her reward, though.
You are spare in your descriptions and yet you tell us so much.
A really accomplished story. We very much like Mariela, and relate to her, as the story concludes.
GreetingsThank you very much @agmoore for your comments. I'm glad you liked Mariela, she's a character I really liked to develop. And even though she didn't get the peace of mind she was hoping for, her sister's company can brighten her life.