Hello @sirpoe,
I found this story most interesting. You blur the lines between perception and reality in a way that might occur in a person undergoing a psychological crisis. This is intriguing in your story. The experiment with switching pronouns is a bit confusing, though in the end the true state of affairs becomes obvious. The narrator's reluctance to use pills is our final clue that she is suffering some sort of psychological rupture occasioned by grief.
This is an original approach. I look forward to reading more stories from you. (I have left you a small tip instead of a vote because my voting power is depleted.)
Hello friend, first of all thanks for the support, I really appreciate your words and for taking the time to read me. It's nice to read that someone is interested in your story
For this story I read about some cases of dementia, obsession and delusions. I'm not an expert in this concept, but I'm a big fan of this kind of stories, I don't know if it's sadism or a weird fascination. I also mix my tastes, because I love endings that are not happy, endings where the reader feels the suffering of the character or is immersed in the emotions of the characters. I would have liked to put more of those horrible things that our mind comes to suffer, and thus create a message that there are people who are having a worse time than many of us. I know it's a bit harsh, but the more impact the message has, the better. Greetings and thank you very much for your support, hugs
Thanks for the tip!