One writer to another--there is a quite simple, perhaps not elegant but workable way to make the break. You can put a visual clue between the paragraphs. Anything, a box, a line, a triangle. This is an unsophisticated fix, but it does work. Sometimes, more words slow the piece down. Your piece has a good pace. If you add words, try to be certain that they don't slow your piece down.
You have excellent instincts as a writer. I'm surprised you're new at this, because you are good. The best thing you have going for you is your insight and sensitivity. By all means, keep writing.🌷
Much appreciated 👍👍👍👍. I will take your advice into account. Thank you 😊