Well done. I was amused. Although there is a bit of horror here, it felt more like Mary Poppins. Poor jogger :)
We do have the feeling at the end though that perhaps the narrator should not put that coin in his pocket.
Well done. I was amused. Although there is a bit of horror here, it felt more like Mary Poppins. Poor jogger :)
We do have the feeling at the end though that perhaps the narrator should not put that coin in his pocket.
Thank you, I enjoyed writing it :) ... I was sort of thinking about making it comedy horror, but that seemed like overkill. It came out better this way?