The way you described Griffin's surroundings and his encounter with the strange girl created such a suspenseful and intriguing atmosphere. I could really feel his confusion and fear in that moment. And when the truth about the girl's identity was revealed, it was a total game-changer. All in all, I thoroughly enjoyed your beautifully written and engaging story.
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I'm glad you enjoyed this story. Thanks so much for this lovely comment. !PIZZA 🙂