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RE: Better Late than Never

in The Ink Well16 days ago

It's a good story you've written though it would have been better if you added some dialogue. The narrator finds himself in a situation where he wishes for a past he'll never see again. And he takes comfort in the present and his achievements and how he'll be remembered when he's gone. Though I suppose it might have been better for him if he faced his situation squarely instead of running from it.

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Thank you very much, I'll remember the corrections