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RE: When the cat's away | Greed and Betrayal

in The Ink Well5 days ago (edited)

Interesting story. Tom's greed gets him into trouble. I think Tom has the entitlement mentality that's why he was always quick to blame his troubles on his boss or colleagues. It's not surprising he turned to theft.

Your story is good but contains a lot of errors. Try editing well before posting.

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Thank you so much for your observation, i have corrected the errors, i had keyboard issues but it has been resolved.

Thank you once again 🌻