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RE: HEARTLESS IN ITS TRUEST SENSE. Prompt 50

in The Ink Welllast year

The narrative viewpoint from the main character made the story immersive. I could empathize with her hopes, confusion, and hurt. The transition from that initial optimism to the harsh reality of the treatment and "enslavement" was jarring and impactful. The madam's strict rules and belittling actions clearly took an emotional toll. Well nice write, Thanks for sharing.