The beach setting is evocative and works well as a symbolic place where the friends unite each year. The ritual of coming together to remember their favorite memories is a nice touch.
I'm curious to know more about the main character's inner journey - why she was reserved initially and how her friendships helped bring her out of her shell. Her relationships seem integral to her growth. Nice story well written.
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I must have missed those tiny details but thank you for pointing them out. I'll be sure to do better next time.