English version
In the morning, as I woke up from the phone alarm, I realized that a lot of time had passed since then. I used to get up a bit little early that day and slept for longer than my usual days. I was looking toward the ceiling for a while and then threw the blanket aside and stood up all of a sudden. My eyes kept searching for the water bottle, and after searching for a few seconds. Then I remembered I didn't get the water bottle at night (shit). Then I started moving the window curtain aside. But today I was feeling a little different, I didn't know why, I couldn't figure out why I was feeling a little different.
When I opened the curtain of the window, I saw someone sitting on a couch in front of the window of the opposite house. I opened my eyes a little (I was still in sleep ) and saw it was a girl. It felt very strange for a moment because after opening the curtain I noticed that I was naked, not completely though (that was an awkward moment for me). Then I quickly closed the curtain back. I put on my T-shirt and went down the stairs to the kitchen. I live on the second floor (or you can say the top floor), it has advantages and disadvantages? Then I turned on the electric kettle for hot water and then I stood there for some time till the water was ready.
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I drank the water and did get buy for some time in my daily routine things. As I walked, my mind kept wandering about the girl's photo. I didn't realize that I had never looked at me but I felt strange while thinking about her. All of a sudden (I was busy in my thoughts), my mummy asked for tea, and she said how many times I have told you not to stay there all night or you have spoiled your eyes. If your company was paying you a good amount then it was fine but (Ya to tere company wale etna paisa he de rahe hote.) I don't know what has happened to the children of today, everyone seems to be busy with their office work. (Mummy kept talking about going to the kitchen). I thought for a while about what mummy said and she was right. What kind of life is this? I don't know when to do something, or how much time it took for this to happen, but today it seems that time is less.
I took a cup of tea in my hand and went to my room. When I was about to open the door of my room, my attention went to the window in front, but there was no one there. I kept looking for a while for a while and then when nothing came in sight I started walking towards my room and opened the curtain. As I looked around the room, I saw that she was there holding a big cup in one hand. It may be chai(tea), green tea, coffee, or maybe anything else (Today it is a bit difficult to tell exactly what is going on when people don't know.) I noticed that she was looking towards me or maybe I misunderstood that.
I don't know what was with me today, but today I came back home after 4 months to enjoy the Diwali festival. But today suddenly after a long time I was feeling better (it feels good to be at home). I could not find out how long it took me to open the door to do that, I was just happy because it was so cool. I heard mummy's voice coming from below, will he stay there all day? I am alone, what do I do? Come here and help me. I saw that she was smiling at me (that is what I was thinking), or I said coming mummy.
Then I heard a loud voice from where I heard, "Wake up stop sleeping. Don't you want to go to the office today?" I woke up from a sudden sleep and found out that it was all a dream. but I was happy and sad at the same time, it was a beautiful dream. My roommate asked me why I was smiling. a wonderful sight he was looking at, I said nothing much brother just a Little wonderful dream I have seen today.
⚠️ This is a fictional story
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Hinglish version (hindi+english)
Subha jese he phone ke alarm se neend khule to dekha ke aaj kafi der ho chuke the uthe mai. Or din Mai thora jaldi he uth Jaya krta tha. Kuch der uppar ese he chat ke or dekhta rehna fir ek he jhatke mai kambal ko side kr diya or seedha khada ho gya. For najre Pani ke bottle ke talash krte rahe. , kuch der idhar udhar dekhne ke baad yaad aaya . Are yr kl raat to Mai apne he nahi laya tha. Fir window ka parda side krne laga. Par aaj kuch alag he lag rha tha pata nahi kyu, kabe kabhe hota hai man pata nahi kyu thora bechen sa lag raha tha.
Jese he window ka parda khola to dekha same Wale makan ke khikdke ke samne koi baitha kuch pad Raha hai. Thora aakho ko mal ke Deka to wo ek ladki the. Ek pal ke lea to bada ajeeb sa laga,kyuki parda khole ke baad dhyan aaya ke uppar to mene kuch phena he nahi tha. Fir mene use raftar se parde ko wapis band kr diya. Fr tshirt daal kar mai stairs utar kar kitchen ke or Jane laga. Mene kamra chat par hai , iske fayade bhe hai or nuksaan bhe hai . Fir gram Pani krne ke lea electric kattle ko on kra or fir kuch samay wahe khada raha jab Tak Pani gram nahi hua.
Pani pe kar mai or ke din charya mai busy ho gya kuch samay ke lea. Par andar he andar wo ladki ke photo mere dimaag Mai chal rahe the. Pata nahi sayad usne mujhe dekha to nahi hoga pada ajeeb sa lag raha the ese bare mai sooch sooch Ke. Etne mai mummy bole le chai pe le bade jaldi uth gya , tere se kitne baar bola hai raat rat bar utha rehta hai or apne aakhle kharab krra hai. Ya to tere company Wale Etna Paisa he de rahe hote . Pata nahi Aaj kal ke bachoo ko kya ho gya hai, bas office Wale he sab kuch ho gye hai inke lea (mummy kitchen ke or jate hue bolte rahe. ). Mai bhe ek pal ke lea soch Mai pad gya tha, ha thek he to bol rahe hai mummy. Kya he life reh gy le hai bas kaam kaam or bas Kaam . ye bhe koi life hai, kuch or krne ka to time he nahi mil pata hai aab to phele kitna time hua krta tha par aab lagta hai time Kam ho hai.
Haath mai cahi ka cup le kar mai , chat ke or chal diya. Fr jese ke kamre ke kundi khol rha tha tab for se Mera dhyan samne wale khidke par gye, par aab waha koi nahi tha. Kuch der tak najar edhar udhar dhundte rahe fir jab kuch najar nahi aaya to mai apne kamre ke andar chala gya. Jese he room ke Nadar gya to mene dekha ke wo bhe ek haath mai ek bada ka cup leke AA rahe the. Sayad usme chai, green tea , ya coffee hoga ya sayad kuch or. (Aaj kar log bhe pata nahi kya kya pene Lage hai to exact bata pata thora muskil ho jata hai. ) Aab mene for se khidki ka parda side kra or mene notice kra kra ke usne bhe mere taraf dekha kuch pal ke lea too par use raftar se hata bhe le.
Pata nahi kya he ho raha tha Aaj mere saath, aj mai ghr 4 month baad wapis aaya hai Diwali ke chutiyo mai. Par aaj ke achanak se Naya chera dekh kar bada he accha lag raha tha. Mai bhe khide se use he dekhe ja Raha tha or pata ne kitne der ho gye the esa krte hue mere chai bhe thandi ho gye the aab tk. Etne mai mummy ke awaj aaye are aab Sara din chai he pita rahega kya ? Neeche aa ja ghr ka kuch kaam bhe kr le Mai akele kya kya kru. Mere dekha ke wo har padi is baat se , or mene kaha ha mummy aaya.
Etne mai ek badi se awaj mere kaano mai aaye, ate bhai uth ja kab TK sota rahega Aaj office nahi jaana hai kya ? Mai ek dum se need se jaga, or pata chala ye sab to ek sapna tha 😬, par chalo koi man mai ek alag he Khushi the ke sapne Mai he sahe kuch to accha hua. Mai uthte he muskura Raha tha or mere roomate bola bhai kya hua bada kuch najar Ara hai, mene kaha kuch nahi bhai bas kuch jyada he accha sapna dekh lea Aaj .
Translated good translator, the content is my original, and this is my imagination.
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You have a good reputation on Hive. This piece is flagging as potentially AI generated. This could be due to you using a translator such as Google translate, as the app has been known to get flagged. This is why we suggest instead to our writers that they try using Deepl when translating. We also require writers who need to translate their stories into English, to include their original language piece alongside the English translation. In this way we can at least verify that the original language piece is clear for plagiarism and AI generation 🙂
When posts are flagged like this we ask writers to confirm for us that their story is completely their own from their imagination, and to edit their post to include their original language piece so that we may validate. Are you able to do this so that we can curate your first submission to The Ink Well?
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thank you so much.
thank you so much for your feedback, I have used Google translator, as English is not my native language. so it is kind of hard to write stories in English so I have used it. There is no option in Deepl to translate from Hindi to English which is why I use Google translator (sorry I missed mentioning that).
I have edited the post and added the original piece of story as well, I am sure that is gonna helpful for you, and I will try to follow the rules of the community thanks for the feedback. Have a great day and week ahead.
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Welcome my friend, The writing style is very informal and conversational, with the narrator directly addressing the reader at points. This gives it a casual, personal feel. The use of parentheses and fragments also adds to the stream-of-consciousness, dreamy effect.
thank you so much for the welcome and for the feedback too. I will try to improve next time thanks have a great day and week ahead.
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Nice dream you had there in your fiction story @bhattg , once I got a very unusual dream where I was sleeping in my dream too😂😂😂. I too try to write a short fiction story based on your inspiration.
ha haa thanks a lot sir, yes dreams are sometimes Awkward too. thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts have a great day and week ahead.
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The part I saw a girl...and I was still naked got me, well not completely though. I love how it ended with a smile which your roommate won't know the little secret behind. From #dreemport
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Nice dream you had there.
Nice dream you had, if only your roommate knew, he would have not woken you up, lol. You welcome to inkwell.
Hehe. Smiling in sleep means something fishy going on mind 😅😅.
Your fiction was amazing but It would be better if your friend disturbed your dream. So that the story could be extended 😅.
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Ummm... Day dreaming fiction. Nice one for a start
Writing is an excellent mental exercise, keep practicing, it will surely do you good.