Looking for a way to message you without having to use Discord... may have to go there after all!
Just a few trivial nits - I'm still only partway in, and the story is awesome, as always! One habit a lot of writers have is repeating the same word in one sentence or one paragraph (or a hundred times too many in one novel). It's very minor, but some readers notice the "echo" in places like this:
It seems to me that the average sentient organic’s perception of meaning is shaped by the time and place that existence takes place.
Trivial. I know.
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You can message me on twitter if you'd prefer carol :)
I looked for that option - and due to format changes there too, I didn't see the Messaging option. Oy ve. I'm worse at tech than you can imagine.