This is a quite intriguing story. The introduction of the scorpion was fascinating. We don't encourage serials here. Generally we like a story to have a beginning, a middle and an end. You didn't know that, so it's OK. I am eager to find out what happened in the laboratory. If only Vladimir had waited, Michael could have given him the serum.
Thank you for writing this story for the Ink Well community. As was mentioned before, your syntax is rough. If the syantax hadn't been so rough, this story would really shine. As always, your drawings are wonderful.
I liked this story. I liked the relationship between the brothers. I like the excursion into quantum physics. I especially liked the way you were able to introduce information about a scorpion into the story and make it relevant. I also like the picture of your time machine :)Hello @coolxxx,
This story was easier to understand than the last one I read. You have a unique perspective and unique style. Just work on syntax and you will soar.
This is a quite intriguing story. The introduction of the scorpion was fascinating. We don't encourage serials here. Generally we like a story to have a beginning, a middle and an end. You didn't know that, so it's OK. I am eager to find out what happened in the laboratory. If only Vladimir had waited, Michael could have given him the serum.
Thank you for writing this story for the Ink Well community. As was mentioned before, your syntax is rough. If the syantax hadn't been so rough, this story would really shine. As always, your drawings are wonderful.
I liked this story. I liked the relationship between the brothers. I like the excursion into quantum physics. I especially liked the way you were able to introduce information about a scorpion into the story and make it relevant. I also like the picture of your time machine :)Hello @coolxxx,
This story was easier to understand than the last one I read. You have a unique perspective and unique style. Just work on syntax and you will soar.