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RE: A conversation about you that you weren’t supposed to overhear. [ EN - SPA ]

in The Ink Well10 months ago

Loving the style! I'm not a fan of first-person stories, but this approach allows readers to experience the character's emotions. Gossiping is dangerous and capable of ruining many lives. Starting a gossip is like using a broken phone, each person adds their own twist to the narrative. The story covers exactly this so bravo!

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Thanks @darthsauron it means a lot!
It's actually the first time I made this type of writing style. Like I said at the beginning I am doing a writing challenge (personal one) and I am pushing myself to write different things I normally write.

Thanks for the comments and the encouragement ❤️