I found your approach to the characters quite unique, especially the one who THINKS she is in fashion ... and then the third one with the Botox ... nice touch! About your dialogue ... we have all been through that situation, and hope that we will have that friend who will comfort us but also tell us like it is! WELL DONE
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I wanted to make real characters. Ordinary people like anyone else.
For your comment I have achieved the goal, thank you very much, I hope to improve every day. Thanks for visiting. @deeanndmathews