Good story!
In case you'd like to change it, you have referred to Eva as HE three times after the sentence 'M. E. Jordan's bed and looked around the room with satisfaction.'
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Good story!
In case you'd like to change it, you have referred to Eva as HE three times after the sentence 'M. E. Jordan's bed and looked around the room with satisfaction.'
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