I have chills.
And they're multiplying as I'm writing this. So many parts of this story made me pause and re-read. Gorgeous lines.
I loved how even in the midst of the questioning - the teacher noticed the beauty of the day and the artist inside came out mid-interview!
And let's not even talk about how jealous I am of your midjourney fluency. heheheh I'm JUST now starting to learn how to create characters and scenes for the flow throughout the story. so... let me avert my eyes, colored green with envy LOLOLOLOLOLOL
back to the story. wow. you know sometimes, I wonder why people are here on Hive instead of writing novels. hehehe and then I remember why I am LOL and say, oh yeah, cuz this is more fun. more connected. more ... appreciated i think too.
Not that I wouldn't mind a one-hit wonder to make all my other dreems come true, but hmmm another day maybe hehehe
This could be the start of an entire mystery novel. I'm terrified of that other girl, but I can't help myself from turning the page to find more about her.
write more. hehe
i won't tell that its a serial if you won't. ROFLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
As long as you aren't losing control hahaha
Don't be jealous, yours are amazing too! I loved your balloon one - although damn the faces are hard to get right. I tend to describe the woman and that stops the melty faces a little eg 'beautiful sad brown haired woman'.
Hahah yeah I think I gained confidence with my writing here but to acctually write a novel, well, I don't have the attention span! Or the desire to market myself.
Thanks so much for your comment.
As for a serial, well, I can imagine it written from another character's perspective, perhaps observing the madness of the teacher? It could be interesting!