Sarah's recollection of her suddenly dissolved friendship with Emma feels realistic and relatable. The metaphor of it fading "into the haze" rings true. The messages sent to each other at the end and their reconciliation in their special place provide a satisfying resolution. Emma's struggle with "demons" explains her actions. Their declarations of forgiveness and the friendship becoming "more powerful" wrap up the story on an uplifting note. The theme of enduring bonds emerges nicely.