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RE: IF HE HAD LISTENED : CREATIVE FICTION PROMPT #110

in The Ink Well2 years ago


Although I do not like sad endings at all, but you kept the pace of your story very well.@kinganny By letting such an intelligent and good basketball player die in such a bad accident, you have created a tragic story. What was the fault of Cole's mother that both her husband and son turned out to be drunkards and careless, both of whom lost their lives due to alcohol intoxication? People need to learn from this.

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