Whaoo.
Well, I enjoyed your story. I felt bad for Cazz because he was ready to take her in and make her a wife as a sex worker, there are a lot of men who wouldn't do that in the physical world, and for Victoria, I don't know what to say concerning her but I believe she will regret it.
This is an amazing story.
I believe you could have made it more interesting with more description and building more in the plot and character. We are all learning and I am sure you will get better.
!DOOK !BBH
Thanks for loving my story
You’re welcome