Yemisi's mother a hospitable, kind, and accommodating. These are qualities that are rarely shown to others. It was a good read, however, I would like to draw your attention to something I assume it's an oversight. In the first paragraph, you mentioned that Oluwole was your uncle, but as the story progressed, he became your brother. This seemed contradictory.
Thank you. Well, what I did there was to create two narrative voices - Yemisi's daughter and Yemisi herself.😊