Your entry is quite simple, but with a well-developed plot. The children's desire to become their mother's pride is well reflected in your story. Excellent work.
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Your entry is quite simple, but with a well-developed plot. The children's desire to become their mother's pride is well reflected in your story. Excellent work.
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