Oof, talk about despair. You did a marvelous job conveying the sense of hopelessness that your poor witch felt, and a foreboding inevitability permeates the entire store like a harbinger of impending doom. Sorry, I'm a bit verbose, but I really liked your story, I felt it in my bones. Great job @b0s!!!
No problem. Might have to pick up the dictionary, but that's not a problem. I'm glad you liked it