You developed the description of the room in an impeccable way, I got to know where was everything that I could need, regarding the historical fact I have very little knowledge of the events, which makes it difficult to appreciate the intention, however the dialogues and the development I liked the plot very much, well done.
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Thank you so much for the feedback
Happy you enjoyed it :D