Wow! What a amazing story. I was gripped the whole time. I knew John the Baptist was beheaded and his head put on display. It's crazy how that piece of information fits so smoothly in your narrative.
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Wow! What a amazing story. I was gripped the whole time. I knew John the Baptist was beheaded and his head put on display. It's crazy how that piece of information fits so smoothly in your narrative.
Thank you so much for reading! And that was exactly what I was looking for :). To provide motive for John's beheading - maybe not a very realistic one maybe, but one that would follow from creating the characters with certain flaws. Good to hear that you feel that worked out!