Greetings, @ soyunasantacruz. I'm just catching up with the comments. Coming a bit late, my appreciations may be redundant.
I must say that in task one I missed a name for your characters. I think you incur in particular value judgments (particular world view) that take away from the richness and autonomy of the characters by saying, for example "she dresses well" "bad makeup" "the Botox application has gotten out of control" I also think the emotion of the description has prevented you from seeing certain contradictions. For example I don't know what to imagine when you say "She uses a flashy and sober wardrobe" or when you say that the character entertains herself by watching "reality shows of artists of the past" . I think that reading is somehow an act of faith. Therefore what is told must always seem credible.
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Hello, it is always a good time to make a constructive comment, you are welcome here.
Certainly the first day, I did not know the importance of the name of the characters, I learned it and now the first thing I think is to baptize my character with a good name including one suitable for the place where the plot develops.
As for the value judgments, I had not noticed that, an author's mistake I guess hehehehehe. That's something I did unconsciously and I wouldn't know how to describe omitting my judgment, surely there is some technique for this that I don't know.
Thank you very much for all your recommendations, it was a pleasure. @gracielaacevedo