I became, by the magic of colours, a child reader.
Now that I write to you, how I wish you would rework it to make it a little slower (so that the children can assimilate the actions given) at the moment of the understanding between the fisherman and the monster. Even if it's a dream, it's a nice dream worth enjoying more, because it illustrates how different people can understand each other.Hello, @coolxxx ! A lovely story with a lovely character with the same name as you. What a happy coincidence!
Thank you for this beautiful story!