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RE: Kay the Pianist


Keep writing, I look forward to continuing to read you.The vocation of a musician is often marked by difficulties that may begin with the impossibility of acquiring his instrument as you have told us, @dele02 . Possibly your short word count has prevented you from deepening the plot and the character's personality and you leave us without knowing the ups and downs of the story.

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Thank you Soo much for this feedback.. appreciate..