Greetings, @jetta.amaya! you convey very well alicia's state of shock in the face of a future that her parents impose on her. The images of the fear of the broken glass are very eloquent. I really liked the intimate character of your story.
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Alicia was literally breaking from so much pressure, she herself was the glass. I'm so glad you liked it and felt Alicia's state of despair. Thank you for reading and commenting, it is very pleasing and valuable to me. A hug.