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RE: Old Phone

in The Ink Well4 years ago (edited)

Magnificent text that takes the reader through different emotions and provides information about the protagonist's life using an old telephone as an indication.
The tenderness of the first emotions turns into increasing tension as you approach the end of the story.
Well done @rakushasu

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Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed it! I always like to set the scene first before I introduce the horror, glad it worked!