When I finished reading your story I remembered the title of Hesse's story The Childhood of a Magician.
Your text is very fluid, a characteristic that is accentuated by the large paragraphs that structure the work in its different scenes.
I loved the image of a very small kingdom which seems to me allegorical to the interiority of the child. Very imaginative. Congratulations, @stormlight24
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