Haha, that's misspelled, the "fo" is not supposed to be there. 😂
What I meant by that sentence is that the sentences are longer than they should be. They need breaks in-between to break up the pacing. And sometimes the breaks are there but no emphasis is needed, ya know?
The punctuation is there to guide the reader. To orient him in a certain direction and make them feel the feelings you want them to feel.
It's just practice, like with everything in writing. 🙂
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Oh, ha-ha, I thought my translation machine was broken. Your suggestions are quite good and full of enthusiasm, I like it, but I prefer that style 😉.
I will also not play in the realm of non-formal word writing in writing stories. Btw, I think you are the inventor of the fo writing technique earlier 😅. Thank you for stopping @grocko. Keep writing and lets learn.