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RE: Peanut Butter

in The Ink Well9 months ago

From the very first line about childhood memories being a breather from adulthood, I was hooked.Surely the past can either comfort or haunt us. Rachelle and Margie's friendship under the guava tree is so sweet and pure.

But then you hit us with that twist - Margie's tragic fate after eating the moldy peanuts. I did not see that coming at all. One minute they're giggling over peanut butter, the next it's a nightmare.

I hope Rachelle will one day be able to forgive herself. I hope the therapy helps her do that too.

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Thank you for reading my story. And yes, I also hope that Rachelle can forgive herself.