Perfectly plotted, perfectly paced and perfectly conceived. Masterful storytelling at its best.
Oh, my, you really had me going…my mind was racing and a million scenarios presented themself. Of course, ultimately, there was no guessing, but I slapped myself and realised (once I reread it) that the conclusion was in the very first line. You are magnificent!
It was always about the fly. You hit it on the nail. I knew that fly had to live and I knew the man had to rescue it. The challenge was in making the man see that :)) The crisis was manufactured to give him the opportunity for growth.
You are clever. Maybe I shouldn't be so transparent.😄
Thanks for that really kind comment.
You were in no way transparent. OMG, that is what I was trying to say. Your story is excellent in every possible way.
⭐️🌈🌹