The call

in The Ink Well2 years ago (edited)

The Call

Jen agitated the developer tray. It was the third time she’d tried to get a decent print from her negatives of the June wedding party. The Junes, Sasha and Gareth, had thrown a stunningly festive wedding feast; no expenses were spared. She’d been really lucky to get the job to do the shoot.

But, now, the prints were really bad—blurred, indistinct—and she had no idea what she’d done wrong.

"It's too damn late to fix it, isn’t it, Jen?" The familiar vinegary scent of the darkroom comforted her, but despite her years of experience, she had no solution.

She ranted, "I did everything by the book. What the hell?"

No worthwhile print of the wedding party on the church’s stairs.

Nothing…

Her mind malfunctioned; she couldn’t think straight. She couldn’t think.

Sasha was a friend of a friend, and she’d been introduced by chance. The girl-woman was lovely, with rippling hair and expressive eyes, full of life and love for Gareth, her chosen.

She’d felt honored in a way she hadn’t since her novice days. Those days when her unsure footing had left massive holes in her income; her ability to survive in a competitive world. Sasha was attuned and aware; she knew exactly what she wanted. Jen eased into the assignment, assured that the directives were explicit.

What could go wrong? But…

Everything was wrong.

No prints.

None.

She hung her head over the developer’s tray; she’d let the print go ‘bad’.

One minute, no more, no less. Then into the stop-bath to cure the image.

But she allowed the print to spoil.

Tears squeezed over her cheek bones. She felt a surge of pain under her ribs.

"You can’t ruin a wedding. It’s just not okay," her voice sent a shudder of movement over the developing solution. The tray vibrated under the low red-eye light.

Her mobile beeped in her pocket. She always kept it well away when she was working in her darkroom; the merest hint of light could ruin a print.

The reminder notification from her phone wouldn’t go away. She fished the cell from her pocket.

‘Send copies of the prints to Sasha for approval.’ The message she’d programmed into her phone

She felt her breath stall. A sense of slow motion overwhelmed her.

She punched Sasha’s number into the keyboard with slow, unsteady fingers.

No answer.

But in a few moments the screen lit up; an incoming…

"You’re the girl with the camera. Right?"

"Yes, but I’ve got something really important to tell you."

The line buzzed; static…

Then the caller’s sharp intake of breath radiated.

"Sasha and Gareth…"

Jen felt the air drain. She felt time, still.

The woman on the line began to sob.


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An interesting story that you share with us. left in suspense about what happened, many hypothetical ideas about the ending come to my head.
I think that in the end the wedding couple suffered an accident.
I really liked the story.
Thanks for sharing.
Good day.

I think you’re right! 💕

This is such a clever story!
I've worked with wedding photographers and I felt Jen's pain, more that the bride's. Good lord! That was a photographer's worst nightmare... well, a bride's too. Very entertaining, and I was fully engaged with your story.
A wonderful piece, and you ended it perfected 👏😍

Thank you so much @millycf1976 I really appreciate it when you read my stuff. 💕❤️💕❤️🤗🤗

It was a great read right before bed 😁

Oh no! So, she is saved from disgrace and despair over the bad wedding photos... because the bride and groom were killed on their honeymoon? Oh my gosh, so tragic. And you know that some part of her can't help but feel relief that she will never have to face them with that news. Whoa... very intense story, @itsostylish. Well done!

Thank you @jayna 😊💕❤️💕❤️🤗🤗
Hope you get better soon!

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Did her call cause... oh dear.

You take my breath away all of the time. When I read you, it's like your characters become my friends. I cheer when they succeed, and stare blankly at my hands with them when the prints no longer matter...

Brilliant woman that you are, you managed to do all of that in under 500 words! We have a feeling for who the photographer is, what the couple was like, what the room feels like, all in time to set us up for a resolution that leaves us absolutely stunned. 😍🙌

THANK YOU for sharing this great story with us! 💚🤗

Thank you @grindan! Your comment means the world 💕❤️💕❤️😊😊😊😊😊

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This is one relief on the photographers end in my perspective but then the pain still remains even though she won't be questioned by anyone no more. Sad but really entertaining.

Such an interesting story although I was hoping to see a beautiful wedding take place at the end.

Sasha and Gareth what??!!

I'm left screaming out😭😂😂